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The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the process of extraction of oil from avacados.

The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the process of extraction of oil from avacados. VEoxQ
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the process of extraction of oil from avacados. At first the avacado fruits are plucked from the trees and segregated for rotten fruits. Next the avacados are washed, cuushed and seperated for the collection of seeds and skins. The remaining product has to be blended and poured in a centrifuger. It maintains the maximum temperature ranges from 45-50c to seperate the solds and oil. There are mainly two stages involved in sepearation process, in stage 1 the seperation of solids and liquids and stage 2 the oil and water from avacado has extracted. The avacado oil will be filtered, clarifiefd and dipendsed into containers. Next step includes the collected waste from rotten fruits, seeds, skins and solid wastes are gathered and sent to the orchard farms. To summarise the removal oil from avacados involves many steps and the centrifuge process is the main process involved in seperating the contents of the fruit.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the
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process
of extraction of
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oil
from
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avacados
.

At
first
the
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avacado
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fruits
are plucked
from the trees and segregated for rotten
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fruits
.
Next
the
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avacados
are washed
,
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cuushed
and
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seperated
for the collection of seeds and skins. The remaining product
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has to
be blended
and poured in a
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centrifuger
. It maintains the maximum temperature ranges from 45-50c to
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seperate
the
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solds
and
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oil
. There are
mainly
two stages involved in
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sepearation
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process
, in stage 1 the
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seperation
of solids and liquids and stage 2 the
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oil
and water from
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avacado
has extracted. The
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avacado
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oil
will
be filtered
,
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clarifiefd
and
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dipendsed
into containers.

Next
step includes the collected waste from rotten
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fruits
, seeds, skins and solid wastes
are gathered
and
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sent
to the orchard farms.

To
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summarise
the removal
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oil
from
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avacados
involves
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many
steps and the centrifuge
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process
is the main
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process
involved in
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seperating
the contents of the
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fruit
.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the process of extraction of oil from avacados.

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