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the map shows the changes in a cinema between 1990 and 2010

the map shows the changes in a cinema between 1990 and 2010 2600A
The illustrations depict various adjustments in a municipal region after constructing a hydroelectric power dam between 1990 and 2010. Overall, this region witnessed considerable changes with an appearance of a lake that expelled the irrigated farmlands from the middle of the map, with the vanishing of the natural sector in the west and arrays of electricity plants and residential houses rising along both sides of the river, which divides the map into two equal edges. On the left-wing of the river, not only was an age-old antique devasted but the natural forests, the living environment of endangered flora and fauna were also demolished to pave the way for a huge lake which enables local fisherman accessed easily to the fishing ground. Moreover, a bulky mountain range standing in the west-north was flattened and superseded by reciprocal lines of power towers. Looking on the right wing of the river, while an upper group of mountains remained status quo, a modern hotel was formulated in the place where was formerly held by irrigated fields and residential dwellings. Noticeably, the rural villages relocated in which was occupied by a chain of bulky mountains. In addition, the hydroelectric dam was erected at the foot of a range of young mountains.
The illustrations depict various adjustments in a municipal region after constructing a hydroelectric power dam between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, this region witnessed considerable
changes
with an appearance of a lake that expelled the irrigated farmlands from the middle of the map, with the vanishing of the natural sector in the west and arrays of electricity plants and residential
houses
rising along both sides of the river, which divides the map into two equal edges.

On the
left
-wing of the river, not
only
was an age-
old
antique
devasted
but
the natural forests, the living environment of endangered flora and fauna were
also
demolished to pave the way for a huge lake which enables local fisherman accessed
easily
to the fishing ground.
Moreover
, a bulky
mountain
range standing in the west-north
was flattened
and superseded by reciprocal lines of power towers.

Looking on the right wing of the river, while an upper group of
mountains
remained status quo, a modern hotel
was formulated
in the place where was
formerly
held by irrigated fields and residential dwellings.
Noticeably
, the rural villages relocated in which
was occupied
by a chain of bulky
mountains
.
In addition
, the hydroelectric dam
was erected
at the foot of a range of young
mountains
.
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