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The diagram shows the differences between the current floor plan and advised changes for the building. At first floor plan consists of spacious kitchen, hall and living room. The house has south entrance and stairs are connected from the hall. kitchen, hall. and living rooms are seperated. back side othe house there one more entrance door entrance was attached to the kitchen. two doors of kitchen and living rooms are attached to the hall at the nirth side of house. The proposed changes are door at the south side of the kitchen and attached to the living room. a big living room without a seperate hall. To summarise the proposed changes shows the luxurious living room, stairs and the internal door attached to the lkitchen. All the rooms are easily accessible to the people. The existing plan lacks has more rooms but congested.
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the differences between the
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floor plan and advised
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floor plan consists of spacious
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,
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living
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room
. The
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house
has south entrance and stairs
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hall
.
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kitchen
,
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and
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living
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rooms
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seperated
.
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back
side
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there one more entrance
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entrance was
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kitchen
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two
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living
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at the
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The proposed
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are
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at the south side of the
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big
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without a
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the proposed
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the luxurious
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, stairs and the internal
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lkitchen
. All the
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are
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people
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143 words
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