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The map explains the changes that took place in a public park named Grange Park from 1920 to 2021. Overall, the park is added with many amenities to the public when compared to initial days, for instances parking facilities, cafe, and the theatre are constructed. In 1920, the park had a fountain in the centre. The park had three rose gardens on the different sides. On the northeast side of the park, the pond was present to supply water for the plants. It had two entrances, one towards Eldon Street and the other toward Arnold Avenue. It had a glasshouse near to an entrance from Eldon Street. They provided the lawn with a stage for musicians on the west side of the park. It had seating facilities for visitors in five different locations. Today, the fountain which was present in the centre is replaced by a rose garden along with that they shift here all the seating facilities. Now the garden is added with the underground parking facility for the visitors. The café is built in the place o

The map explains the changes that took place in a public park named Grange Park from 1920 to 2021. Overall, the park is added with many amenities to the public when compared to initial days, for instances parking facilities, cafe, and the theatre are constructed. In 1920, the park had a fountain in the centre. The park had three rose gardens on the different sides. On the northeast side of the park, the pond was present to supply water for the plants. It had two entrances, one towards Eldon Street and the other toward Arnold Avenue. It had a glasshouse near to an entrance from Eldon Street. They provided the lawn with a stage for musicians on the west side of the park. It had seating facilities for visitors in five different locations. Today, the fountain which was present in the centre is replaced by a rose garden along with that they shift here all the seating facilities. Now the garden is added with the underground parking facility for the visitors. The café is built in the place o gXE1
The map explains the changes that took place in a public park named Grange Park from 1920 to 2021. Overall, the park is added with many amenities to the public when compared to initial days, for instances parking facilities, cafe, and the theatre are constructed. In 1920, the park had a fountain in the centre. The park had three rose gardens on the different sides. On the northeast side of the park, the pond was present to supply water for the plants. It had two entrances, one towards Eldon Street and the other toward Arnold Avenue. It had a glasshouse near to an entrance from Eldon Street. They provided the lawn with a stage for musicians on the west side of the park. It had seating facilities for visitors in five different locations. Today, the fountain which was present in the centre is replaced by a rose garden along with that they shift here all the seating facilities. Now the garden is added with the underground parking facility for the visitors. The café is built in the place of a rose garden, which is in the north direction of the park. They changed the pond, which was on the northeast side of the park to the children’s play area. They construct water features in the place of a glasshouse. They refurbished the stage in the west direction to an amphitheatre for concerts. Although the park has seen much development, entrances are still the same over the period.
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that took place in a public
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park
named Grange
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Park
from 1920 to 2021.
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, the
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park
is
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added
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amenities to the public when compared to initial days, for instances parking facilities,
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cafe
, and the
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theatre
are constructed
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In 1920, the
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park
had a fountain in the
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centre
. The
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park
had three rose
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gardens
on the
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different
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sides
. On the northeast side of the
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park
, the pond was present to supply water for the plants. It had two entrances, one towards Eldon Street and the other toward Arnold Avenue. It had a glasshouse near to an entrance from Eldon Street. They provided the lawn with a stage for musicians on the west side of the
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park
. It had seating facilities for visitors in five
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different
locations.

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Today
, the fountain which was present in the
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centre
is replaced
by a rose
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garden
along with that they shift here all the seating facilities.
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Now
the
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garden
is
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added
with the underground parking facility for the visitors. The café
is built
in the place of a rose
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garden
, which is in the north direction of the
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park
. They
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changed
the pond, which was on the northeast side of the
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park
to the children’s play area. They construct water features in the place of a glasshouse.
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They
refurbished the stage in the west direction to an
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amphitheatre
for concerts. Although the
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park
has
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seen
much development, entrances are
still
the same over the period.
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IELTS academic The map explains the changes that took place in a public park named Grange Park from 1920 to 2021. Overall, the park is added with many amenities to the public when compared to initial days, for instances parking facilities, cafe, and the theatre are constructed. In 1920, the park had a fountain in the centre. The park had three rose gardens on the different sides. On the northeast side of the park, the pond was present to supply water for the plants. It had two entrances, one towards Eldon Street and the other toward Arnold Avenue. It had a glasshouse near to an entrance from Eldon Street. They provided the lawn with a stage for musicians on the west side of the park. It had seating facilities for visitors in five different locations. Today, the fountain which was present in the centre is replaced by a rose garden along with that they shift here all the seating facilities. Now the garden is added with the underground parking facility for the visitors. The café is built in the place o

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