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The map details alterations to the town of Pentland from 1980 to 2007.

The map details alterations to the town of Pentland from 1980 to 2007. V2LQ

The map details alterations to the town of Pentland from 1980 to 2007. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there was a lot a of residential and commercial development over the years including construction of a marina for yachts, shops, houses and entertainment facilities. In 1980, Pentland consisted mainly of grasslands to the south, two main intersecting roads, an eastern car park, an industrial area in the west and the sea to the north. By 2007, every area had changed or been relocated. An additional road was built by the coast (now a yacht marina) with a park bordering it in the northwest and seaside apartments on the opposite side. The roads are now lined with shops and the car park added floors and moved from the eastern to western end of town, adjacent to a new swimming pool. In the south, grasslands made way for a cinema to the west and rows of houses along a new eastward avenue

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 of residential and commercial development over the years including construction of a marina for yachts, shops, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and entertainment facilities.

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Pentland
 consisted mainly
 of grasslands to the south, two main intersecting roads, an eastern car park, an industrial area in the west and the sea to the north. By 2007, every area had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 or been relocated
. An additional road was built
 by the coast (This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a yacht marina) with a park bordering it in the northwest and seaside apartments on the opposite side.

The roads are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 lined with shops and the car park This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 floors and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from the eastern to western This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of town, adjacent to a new swimming pool. In the south, grasslands made way for a cinema to the west and rows of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
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