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The given map illustrations the information about alterations took place in the layout of the coastal area which is known as Portland between 1950 and 2007 overall, it is clear that radical modifications were made in the coastal area.

The given map illustrations the information about alterations took place in the layout of the coastal area which is known as Portland between 1950 and 2007 overall, it is clear that radical modifications were made in the coastal area. 6g2K
The given map illustrations the information about alterations took place in the layout of the coastal area which is known as Portland between 1950 and 2007 overall, it is clear that radical modifications were made in the coastal area. It can be seen that Portland was facilitated with a number of developments and became a commercial area over 57 years. To begin with, the industrial area was replaced by a swimming pool and a small Park towards North West in 2007. During 1950 the only sea existed on North but in followings years it was facilitated by yacht Maria. The multi-storey car park was constructed on the left side of the road by shifting from the left side. The main road which bisects city in two parts remained unchanged. Probing further, till 2007 new apartments were installed on a place of the car park on North East. Shops were opened on both sides of the road in place of Greenland. On the bottom of the shops, there was a place for accommodation and a new cinema was built in the South west. The greener space used for installing new facilities.
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area
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as Portland between 1950 and 2007

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overall
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that radical modifications
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in the coastal
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area
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seen
that Portland
was facilitated
with a number of developments and became a commercial
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area
over 57 years.

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with, the industrial
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area
was replaced
by a swimming pool and a
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small
Park towards North West in 2007. During 1950 the
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only
sea existed on North
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but
in followings years it
was facilitated
by yacht Maria. The
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multi-storey
car park
was constructed
on the
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left
side of the road by shifting from the
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left
side. The main road which bisects city in two parts remained unchanged.

Probing
further
, till 2007 new apartments
were installed
on a
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place
of the car park on North East. Shops
were opened
on both sides of the road in
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place
of Greenland. On the bottom of the shops, there was a
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place
for accommodation and a new cinema
was built
in the South west. The greener space
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used
for installing new facilities.

IELTS academic The given map illustrations the information about alterations took place in the layout of the coastal area which is known as Portland between 1950 and 2007 overall, it is clear that radical modifications were made in the coastal area.

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