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The map depicts how the university sport courts has been developed.

The map depicts how the university sport courts has been developed. 0E29q
The map depicts how the university sport courts has been developed over the last thirty-one years. At first glanced, it can be observed that the area has undergone major changes, and the most striking development is the replacement of green areas with an infrastructure project. In 1990, the outdoor pool was built in the north west of the university, with a café and a quite large reception next to it. Notably, the outdoor pool has given way to the indoor pool, the only exception being café and reception that have not been changed over the time period. Additionally, there has been a place called changing room which has been enlarged noticeably, and it has situated adjacent to fitness center. To the south, having been converted into a fitness center, tennis court constructed in the south west has now gone. It should be noted that tennis court has been developed, with increasing the number of courts. Turning to north west, basketball court has stood in place of park.
The map depicts how the university sport
courts
has
been developed
over the last thirty-one years. At
first
glanced, it can
be observed
that the area has undergone major
changes
, and the most striking development is the replacement of green areas with an infrastructure project.

In 1990, the outdoor pool
was built
in the
north west
of the university, with a café and a quite large reception
next
to it.
Notably
, the outdoor pool has
given
way to the indoor pool, the
only
exception being café and reception that have not been
changed
over the time period.
Additionally
, there has been a place called changing room which has
been enlarged
noticeably
, and it has situated adjacent to fitness center.

To the south, having
been converted
into a fitness center, tennis
court
constructed in the
south west
has
now
gone. It should
be noted
that tennis
court
has
been developed
, with increasing the number of
courts
. Turning to
north west
, basketball
court
has stood in place of park.
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