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The graph depicts the yearly proportion of visitors to an island in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017

The graph depicts the yearly proportion of visitors to an island in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017 okOWB

The graph depicts the yearly proportion of visitors to an island in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017. The guest is multiplied in seven years. From this illustration Look at the bar chart; the chart is illustrated. In 2010, there were a million tourists went to the island. The total number of visitors was indicated to rise up steadily to nearly 3 million in 2016. Then it was picked higest point at 3. 5 million tourists in 2017. From the graph, the number of tourists was staying on the island is deteriorated that from 2010 to 2013 was increased by 0. 7 to 1. 5 million. Then, it was steady from 2013 to 2015. After this point to 2016 was dropped the visitor's number slightly. It might be 1. 2 million that year. However, in 2017 it was touched the higest end at 1. 5 million. Turn to the remaining data set; visitors who stayed in the island on cruise ships was another option as indicated fluctuation from 2010 to 2012. Nevertheless, from 2013 to 2017, cruise ships got much appreciation compared to living on the island. It was boosted up steadily by 0. 5 to 2 million. To abbreviate the whole chart. Visitors had increased this island illustrated three options simultaneously.

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visitors
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island
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 much appreciation compared to living on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. It was boosted
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 by 0. 5 to 2 million.

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Visitors
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