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The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and female in contrasted age groups such as;between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did daily exrcise in 2010.

The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and female in contrasted age groups such as; between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did daily exrcise in 2010. 9w0xr
The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and female in contrasted age groups such as; between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did daily exrcise in 2010. To begin with, there had been a dramatic increase seen in the regular physical exercise doing by men, it accounted for 52. 5% the male age group 35 to 44, 53. 3% age group 45 to 54 and 53% age group 55 to 64 respectively in australia in 2010. However, a sharp decrease was notice in the daily exrcise doing by women, it accounted for 45. 1% the female age group 55 to 64, 43. 1% age group 45 to 52 and 39. 5% age group 35 to 44 singificantly. there had been a dramatic increase seen in the regular physical exercise doing by men, it accounted for 52. 5% the male age group 35 to 44, 53. 3% age group 45 to 54 and 53% age group 55 to 64 respectively in australia in 2010. However, a sharp decrease was notice in the daily exrcise doing by women, it accounted for 45. 1% the female age group 55 to 64, 43. 1% age group 45 to 52 and 39. 5% age group 35 to 44 singificantly. Overall, it can been seen that in 2010, majority of male did regular exercise rather than female in which almost all ages groups. The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and female in contrasted age groups such as; between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did daily exrcise in 2010. To begin with, there had been a dramatic increase seen in the regular physical exercise doing by men, it accounted for 52. 5% the male age group 35 to 44, 53. 3% age group 45 to 54 and 53% age group 55 to 64 respectively in australia in 2010. However, a sharp decrease was notice in the daily exrcise doing by women, it accounted for 45. 1% the female age group 55 to 64, 43. 1% age group 45 to 52 and 39. 5% age group 35 to 44 singificantly. there had been a dramatic increase seen in the regular physical exercise doing by men, it accounted for 52. 5% the male age group 35 to 44, 53. 3% age group 45 to 54 and 53% age group 55 to 64 respectively in australia in 2010. However, a sharp decrease was notice in the daily exrcise doing by women, it accounted for 45. 1% the female age group 55 to 64, 43. 1% age group 45 to 52 and 39. 5% age group 35 to 44 singificantly. Overall, it can been seen that in 2010, majority of male did regular exercise rather than female in which almost all ages groups.
The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and
female
in contrasted
age
groups
such as; between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did
daily
exrcise
in 2010.

To
begin
with, there had been a
dramatic
increase
seen
in the
regular
physical
exercise
doing
by
men
, it
accounted
for 52. 5% the male
age
group
35 to 44, 53. 3%
age
group
45 to 54 and 53%
age
group
55 to 64
respectively
in
australia
in 2010.
However
, a
sharp
decrease
was
notice
in the
daily
exrcise
doing
by
women
, it
accounted
for 45. 1% the
female
age
group
55 to 64, 43. 1%
age
group
45 to 52 and 39. 5%
age
group
35 to 44
singificantly
.
there
had been a
dramatic
increase
seen
in the
regular
physical
exercise
doing
by
men
, it
accounted
for 52. 5% the male
age
group
35 to 44, 53. 3%
age
group
45 to 54 and 53%
age
group
55 to 64
respectively
in
australia
in 2010.
However
, a
sharp
decrease
was
notice
in the
daily
exrcise
doing
by
women
, it
accounted
for 45. 1% the
female
age
group
55 to 64, 43. 1%
age
group
45 to 52 and 39. 5%
age
group
35 to 44
singificantly
.

Overall
, it
can been
seen
that in 2010,
majority of
male did
regular
exercise
rather
than
female
in which almost all
ages
groups
. The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and
female
in contrasted
age
groups
such as; between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did
daily
exrcise
in 2010.

To
begin
with, there had been a
dramatic
increase
seen
in the
regular
physical
exercise
doing
by
men
, it
accounted
for 52. 5% the male
age
group
35 to 44, 53. 3%
age
group
45 to 54 and 53%
age
group
55 to 64
respectively
in
australia
in 2010.
However
, a
sharp
decrease
was
notice
in the
daily
exrcise
doing
by
women
, it
accounted
for 45. 1% the
female
age
group
55 to 64, 43. 1%
age
group
45 to 52 and 39. 5%
age
group
35 to 44
singificantly
.
there
had been a
dramatic
increase
seen
in the
regular
physical
exercise
doing
by
men
, it
accounted
for 52. 5% the male
age
group
35 to 44, 53. 3%
age
group
45 to 54 and 53%
age
group
55 to 64
respectively
in
australia
in 2010.
However
, a
sharp
decrease
was
notice
in the
daily
exrcise
doing
by
women
, it
accounted
for 45. 1% the
female
age
group
55 to 64, 43. 1%
age
group
45 to 52 and 39. 5%
age
group
35 to 44
singificantly
.

Overall
, it
can been
seen
that in 2010,
majority of
male did
regular
exercise
rather
than
female
in which almost all
ages
groups
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates information about the percentage of Australian male and female in contrasted age groups such as; between (15 to 42) and above 65 who did daily exrcise in 2010.

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