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Honey bee life cycle. Explain.

Honey bee life cycle. Explain. EwYRL
The diagram depicts the stages involved in the life cycle of the honey bee. There are as many as six prominent stages involved in the process. Overall, it is clear from the figure that the procedure starts at an egg and reaches the fully grown adult bee. This is a cyclic process and may take around one month of time to complete one such cycle. Firstly, the females lay 1 or 2 eggs, once in three days. It takes almost 9-10 days to hatch. After the hatching is done, it develops its wings. For growing its wings, it might take another week. Consequently, Nymphs are grown after nearly 9 rotations of the earth. These, moults progressed 3 times faster resulting in a young adult. Furthermore, it takes four more days to become mature. The entire process may consume more than a month. The fully-developed bee again lays eggs once every 3 days. Hence, this is cyclic process.
The diagram depicts the stages involved in the life cycle of the honey bee. There are as
many
as six prominent stages involved in the process.

Overall
, it is
clear
from the figure that the procedure
starts
at an egg and reaches the
fully
grown adult bee. This is a cyclic process and may take around one month of time to complete one such cycle.

Firstly
, the females lay 1 or 2 eggs, once in three days. It takes almost 9-10 days to hatch. After the hatching
is done
, it develops its wings. For growing its wings, it might take another week.
Consequently
, Nymphs
are grown
after
nearly
9 rotations of the earth. These,
moults
progressed 3 times faster resulting in a young adult.
Furthermore
, it takes four more days to become mature. The entire process may consume more than a month. The
fully
-developed bee again lays eggs once every 3 days.
Hence
, this is cyclic process.
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IELTS academic Honey bee life cycle. Explain.

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  American English
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