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The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figures of four waste substances in a city between 1992 and 2002.

The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figures of four waste substances in a city between 1992 and 2002. 73kjA
The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figures of four waste substances in a city between 1992 and 2002. From an overall perspective, the recycling rates followed an increasing trend over time for every materials. According to the chart, Firstly waste materials of glass were recycling around 15% in 1932, this rate increasing dramatically over time and reached at more than three times of initial rate which accounts for 50% that is highest among all the substance in all times. Secondly, the waste materials of papers also rose dramatically which stood at 40% in 2002 where this rate was around 13% in beginning. Thirdly, around 8% cans were reproduced in 1992, this rate increased over the times and reached at near 20% in 1997. Furthermore, this rate rose gradually and stood at sharp 20% in 2002. Finally plastic waste materials were recycled 10% in 1992 and this rate rose slightly reached at maximum which accounts for around 12% which did not change until 2002.
The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figures of four
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waste
substances in a city between 1992 and 2002.

From an
overall
perspective, the recycling
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rates
followed an increasing trend over
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time
for every
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materials
.

According to the chart,
Firstly
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waste
materials of glass were recycling
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around
15% in 1932, this
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rate
increasing
dramatically
over
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time
and reached at more than three
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times
of initial
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rate
which accounts for 50%
that is
highest among all the substance in all times.

Secondly
, the
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waste
materials of papers
also
rose
dramatically
which stood at 40% in 2002 where this
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rate
was
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around
13% in beginning.
Thirdly
,
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around
8% cans
were reproduced
in 1992, this
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rate
increased over the
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times
and reached at near 20% in 1997.
Furthermore
, this
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rate
rose
gradually
and stood at sharp 20% in 2002.
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Finally
plastic
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waste
materials
were recycled
10% in 1992 and this
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rate
rose
slightly
reached at maximum which accounts for
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around
12% which did not
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change
until 2002.
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IELTS academic The bar chart provides information about reprocessing figures of four waste substances in a city between 1992 and 2002.

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4 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
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