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Recycling percentage for selected materials 1982-2010

Recycling percentage for selected materials 1982-2010 pKOy3

From the given line graph it can be clearly understood that a variety of materials used for recycling process. Overall, from the given sketch it can be depicted that paper and cardboard played a huge rule in reuse, secondly glass containers rather than others mentioned on the graph. Let's discuss in details from the given measurement. Firstly during the period of 1982, the need of paper and cardboard demand was more rather than glass and other stuffs, and its ratio was 60% whereas glass was 50% respectively. In addition to that an Aluminum need was 10% only that time where as plastics not at all used. Since from 1986, onwards the need of aluminum was only 10% and plastics was 0%, following that the demand of paper, cardboard and glass percent were fluctuating simultaneously. For instance, from 45% to it was going downward and again moving forward and finally reached 70% simultaneously and glass also similar like above and reached 70% at 2010. Whereas, it can be clearly depicted that the usage for aluminum also gradually raising and reached 45% at 2010, notable exception was only plastics because its need was very less and maximum reached 10% in 2010.

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