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The map chart shows the house fore its redevelopment

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The given map chart of house illustrate the actual house and plans for its renovation. Overall, the most of the space is occupied by hall. However, in the plan study or bathroom will cover a large area in the home. In details in the North side of a house the living room will changed to the bedroom and size of bedroom in the North East side view change from rectangular to square and vice versa with Kitchen in East side of home. The study room in the right handed down corner on the upper Garden will be remain the same. Moreover, the size of main hall of the house will also decrease. Further detailing, there will be two neurones in the house one is en-suite bathroom which will be situated on the south side of the home and the other in new study room with previous study room on the Westside. Then the shape of main bathroom will be changed also. The size of main entrance will also got decreasing and the lower South Garden will be replaced by parking.
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map chart of
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house
illustrate the actual
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house
and plans for its renovation.
Overall
, the most of the space
is occupied
by hall.
However
, in the plan
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study
or bathroom will cover a large area in the home. In
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details
in the North side of a
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house
the living
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room
will
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changed
to the bedroom and size of bedroom in the North East side view
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change
from rectangular to square and vice versa with Kitchen in East side of home. The
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study
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room
in the
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right handed
down corner on the upper Garden will be
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remain
the same.
Moreover
, the size of main hall of the
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house
will
also
decrease.
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Further
detailing, there will be two
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neurones
in the
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house
one is en-suite bathroom which will
be situated
on the south side of the home and the other in new
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study
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room
with previous
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study
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room
on the Westside. Then the shape of main bathroom will be
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changed
also
. The size of main entrance will
also
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got
decreasing and the lower South Garden will
be replaced
by parking.
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IELTS academic The map chart shows the house fore its redevelopment

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