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The given diagram shows the process of olive seeds which are converted into olive oil

The given diagram shows the process of olive seeds which are converted into olive oil x0mPN
It can be clearly seen that from the plant of olive, the fruits are collected into baskets. after that, they are rinsed into cold water in a machine. then, olives are belt. After belting process, they are smashed into a round shaped container. Nextly, olive paste and olive stones are separated out. Moving further to rest of the description, the olive paste is packed into bag which have holes. In next step, pressing procedure is done for the separation of oil and water. After then, oil is transfered to factories where olive oil is store and sale. In an overall, the procedure to making olive oil consists of various step which are interlinked with each other. Therefore, ommision the whole process one step may disturbs the whole process.
It can be
clearly
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seen
that from the plant of olive, the fruits
are collected
into baskets.
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after
that, they
are rinsed
into
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
water in a machine.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
then
,
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olives
are belt. After belting process, they
are smashed
into a round shaped container.
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Nextly
, olive paste and olive stones
are separated
out. Moving
further
to rest of the description, the olive paste
is packed
into bag which have holes. In
next
step, pressing procedure
is done
for the separation of
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oil
and water. After then,
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oil
is
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transfered
to factories where olive
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oil
is store and sale. In an
overall
, the procedure to making olive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
oil
consists of various step which
are interlinked
with each other.
Therefore
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
ommision
the whole process
'one step' is missing a hyphen.
one step
may disturbs the whole process.
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IELTS academic The given diagram shows the process of olive seeds which are converted into olive oil

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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