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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow. APja1
The given table illustrates the information about the consumption of beers in 2000, and how many people were death from alcohol in both sexes in distinct six nations in 2005. Overall, it is noticed that in all six countries males deaths more than females from alcohol, while the highest death rate from alcohol, consumption of beers was in the Czech Republic. At first looking, in 2005, males death from alcohol were 112000 and females 13000 in Lithunia, Which was the least as compare to others. The maximum number of deaths were in the Czech Republic the total of both sexes was 1369000 and the consumption of beer was 132 L per capita in 2000. The second highest death in Estonia men and women accounted for 332000 and 15000 respectively. The beers consumed in Estonia was 98 L by per person. In addition, the total number of deaths from alcohol in Germany was 118 5000 in 2005, although beer consumption was 107 L per capita. 783000 males had that from alcohol in Australia, whereas females 130000. The consumption of beer in Austria and Germany had a very negligible difference, which was only 1 L. Deaths from alcohol in Ireland was 582000.
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consumption
of beers in 2000, and how
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many
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were death from
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in both sexes in distinct six nations in 2005.

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, it
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that in all six countries males deaths more than females from
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alcohol
, while the highest death rate from
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alcohol
,
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consumption
of beers was in the Czech Republic.

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first
looking, in 2005, males death from
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alcohol
were 112000 and females 13000 in
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Lithunia
, Which was the least as compare to others. The maximum number of deaths were in the Czech Republic the total of both sexes was 1369000 and the
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of beer was 132 L per capita in 2000. The second highest death in Estonia
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men
and women accounted for 332000 and 15000
respectively
.
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beers consumed in Estonia was 98 L by per person.

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, the total number of deaths from
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alcohol
in Germany was 118 5000 in 2005, although beer
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consumption
was 107 L per capita. 783000 males had that from
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alcohol
in Australia, whereas females 130000. The
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consumption
of beer in Austria and Germany had a
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negligible difference, which was
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1 L. Deaths from
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in Ireland was 582000.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting description of the correlation of the table that follow.

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6.0
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