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The map chart shows the alterations in the park of Australia.

The map chart shows the alterations in the park of Australia. Q5Lax
The given layouts depicts the altra nations occurred in the park of Australia. Overall, the given Australia park underwent serval major and minor modification throughout the period. Bbq as well as new branches are arranged in the park. Moreover a new tennis court is constructed. In detail, in period time Ocean was in the north direction. The location of the remains constant in the present time. Cycle per that was lying along with the ocean bear no construction work in current it house. Further more, there was only greenary towards south west of the park. Half of the forest is cleared and replaced with new branches and a barbecue soccer field is never restricted. In previous time there was a cafe in the upward direction of the soccer field but now it is replaced with battery. Cafe is relocated to word best side of the soccer field. However tennis court is developer in the south-east. Although there is several change in the park but park Avenue lying in the southern direction, totally remains same.
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layouts depicts the
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altra
nations occurred in the
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park
of Australia.

Overall
, the
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given
Australia
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park
underwent
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serval
major and minor modification throughout the period.
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Bbq
as well
as new branches
are arranged
in the
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park
.
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Moreover
a new tennis court
is constructed
.

In detail, in period time Ocean was in the north direction. The location of the remains constant in the present time. Cycle per that was lying along with the ocean bear no construction work in
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current
it
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house
.
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more, there was
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only
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greenary
towards
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south west
of the
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park
. Half of the forest
is cleared
and replaced with new branches and a barbecue soccer field is never restricted. In previous time there was a
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cafe
in the upward direction of the soccer field
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but
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now
it
is replaced
with battery.
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Cafe
is relocated
to
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word best
side of the soccer field.
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However
tennis court is developer in the south-east. Although there is several
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change
in the
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park
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but
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park
Avenue lying in the southern direction,
totally
remains same.
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IELTS academic The map chart shows the alterations in the park of Australia.

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174 words
6.0
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