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The given Line chart illustrates the information of membership of men and women in gym between 1980 to 2010.

The given Line chart illustrates the information of membership of men and women in gym between 1980 to 2010. GJMEx

The given Line graph indicates the information about the membership of both men and women in gym from 1980 to 2010. Overall, It is conspicuous from the chart that in the first year men have been the largest share in the gym membership. While, In the other years both Genders showed zig zag trend with the passage of time. Look at the graph for mote detail, the menu's started the period with 2000 after five years this numbers reach at highers to 4000. Then, othe interest of males decreased sharply and came out at 1800 in 1995.

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IELTS academic The given Line chart illustrates the information of membership of men and women in gym between 1980 to 2010.

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American English

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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