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Task 1: Write 150 words. Internet users as percentage of population

Task 1: Write 150 words. Internet users as percentage of population Q5Lpx
The line graph compares data on the percentage of population used internet in the USA, Canada & Mexico, over a 10-year-period, starting from 1999. Overall, it is evident that, the proportion of population who used internet in the USA & Canada rose significantly inmerely 10 years, while in Mexico it was quite different. In the year 1999, internet users as proportion of population in the USA was near about 20%, which was the highest of that time and in Canada & Mexico, the percentage were approximately 10% & 5% respectively. In 2005, the proportion of internet users were about 25% & 70% in Mexico, Canada & USA respectively. In 2009, it increased nearly 100% in Canada, which was the highest and about 70% in the USA, while in Mexico it was less than 50%. To conclude, it can be said that usage of internet in the USA & Canada experienced a rapid rise, while Mexico fall behind.
The line graph compares data on the percentage of population
used
internet in the USA, Canada & Mexico, over a 10-year-period, starting from 1999.

Overall
, it is evident that, the proportion of population who
used
internet in the USA & Canada rose
significantly
inmerely
10 years, while in Mexico it was quite
different
.

In the year 1999, internet users as proportion of population in the USA was near about 20%, which was the highest of that time and in Canada & Mexico,

the percentage were approximately 10% & 5%
respectively
.

In 2005, the proportion of internet users were about 25% & 70% in Mexico, Canada

& USA
respectively
. In 2009, it increased
nearly
100% in Canada, which was the highest and about 70% in the USA, while in Mexico it was less than 50%.

To conclude
, it can
be said
that usage of internet in the USA & Canada experienced a rapid rise, while Mexico fall behind.
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IELTS academic Task 1: Write 150 words. Internet users as percentage of population

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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