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The map below sow recent changes in the own of Kimsville.

The map below sow recent changes in the own of Kimsville. 2JGj
The two figures compare the current developments in the city of Kimsville from 2002 and present times. It can be observed that it transformed from simple and green land to a modern and busy area. In 2002, it can be seen that in the north it has a shopping center in the west it has an old cinema. In addition, in the east, it has a factory, while 1 tree in the northeast, 1 in the southwest, and 1 in the southeast. On the other hand, after 19 years the 2 trees on the left side disappeared plus new projects had been added such as new apartments, new train station, and football stadium on the left. Meanwhile, the city center and shopping center remain the same, moreover, the old cinema was removed and build a pub which is also a current development. Finally, the 2 trees on the right side remain there on the contrary, instead of the factory, it is a software company that can be seen now.
The two figures compare the
current
developments in the city of
Kimsville
from 2002 and present times. It can
be observed
that it transformed from simple and green land to a modern and busy area. In 2002, it can be
seen
that in the north it has a shopping center in the west it has an
old
cinema.
In addition
, in the east, it has a factory, while 1 tree in the northeast, 1 in the southwest, and 1 in the southeast.
On the other hand
, after 19 years the 2 trees on the
left
side disappeared plus new projects had been
added
such as new apartments, new train station, and football stadium on the
left
. Meanwhile, the city center and shopping center remain the same,
moreover
, the
old
cinema
was removed
and build a pub which is
also
a
current
development.
Finally
, the 2 trees on the right side remain there
on the contrary
,
instead
of the factory, it is a software
company
that can be
seen
now
.
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IELTS academic The map below sow recent changes in the own of Kimsville.

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