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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. JAJa

The given process illustrates the stages of manufacturing and the process adjustment of the consumer goods. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that goods manufacturing is complex process which is done number of stages and information from end-user is used as a feedback. To begin, raw materials and manufactured companents are stored until the production planning is done. Two main direction involve manufacturing process, one is the steps of manufacting itself and another one is flow of information feedback. After the product research, the design process is done and it is used as a input for production planning phase. Followingly, the assembly inspection, testing and packaging stages are done sequentily. Testing phase have effect on planning were the design stage coordinates them. The final two stages are despatch an sales The feedback from sales used in market research and output of this stage used as a input for design, packaging and advertising phase.

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