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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten very much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where its relevant.

The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten very much. y2YJ
The charts given illustrate the percentages of various substances which are harmful if eaten a lot in typical meals. Overall, dinner meals are often contained more harmful substances than other kinds of meals, while breakfast meals are contained the least mentioned nutrients. On the one hand, sodium and saturated fat are used more in lunch than breakfast and snacks. The usage of sodium for lunch is accounted for 29% and the equivalent figure of saturated fat is 26%. Breakfast and snacks are same in percentages of sodium at 14%, while snacks still contain more saturated fate than breakfast meal. In the other hand, sugar is used much more in snacks than other kinds of meals at 42% and the figure for dinner is 23%. The rest kinds of meals are account for less portions of suger using, which are 16% for breakfast and 19% for lunch.
The charts
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illustrate the percentages of various substances which are harmful if eaten a lot in typical meals.

Overall
, dinner
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meals
are
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contained more harmful substances than other kinds of
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meals
, while
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breakfast
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meals
are contained
the least mentioned nutrients.

On the one hand, sodium and saturated
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fat
are
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used
more in lunch than
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breakfast
and
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snacks
. The usage of sodium for lunch
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for 29% and the equivalent figure of saturated
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fat
is 26%.
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Breakfast
and
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snacks
are same in percentages of sodium at 14%, while
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snacks
still
contain more saturated fate than
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breakfast
meal.

In the other hand, sugar is
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used
much more in
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snacks
than other kinds of
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meals
at 42% and the figure for dinner is 23%. The rest kinds of
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meals
are account for
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less
portions of
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suger
using, which are 16% for
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breakfast
and 19% for lunch.
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IELTS academic The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten very much.

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