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The map below shows tourists a number of different ways to visit Mount Eron in a na9onal park. Summarise the informa9on by selec9ng and repor9ng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows tourists a number of different ways to visit Mount Eron in a na9onal park. Summarise the informa9on by selec9ng and repor9ng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. brbK6
The given diagram illustrates numerous ways to access Mount Eron in a national park. Overall, what can be drawn from the graph is that there are three different ways to visit the mount, starting from the sunset, sunrise areas and cultural center. The west sunset viewing area is the longest way to approach the mountain, visitors have to drive a long way in the main road to the parking area near the toilets and first-aid point. Starting from the sunrise viewing area in the north will save tourists more time getting to that parking area than going from the sunset viewing area. In the south, there is a cultural center that provides the shortest access to Mount Eron for travellers. All of the visitors have to pass the walking track before reaching the climbing track and climb to the top of the mountain. Besides that, there is another direction for those who do not want to climb at the second parking lot from the sunset viewing area. It has a walking path that goes directly to the top of Mount Eron.
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diagram illustrates numerous
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to access
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Mount
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Eron
in a national park.

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, what can
be drawn
from the graph is that there are three
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different
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ways
to visit the
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mount
, starting from the
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sunset
, sunrise
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areas
and cultural center.

The west
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sunset
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viewing
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area
is the longest
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way
to approach the mountain, visitors
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have to
drive a long
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way
in the main road to the parking
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area
near the toilets and
first
-aid point. Starting from the sunrise
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viewing
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area
in the north will save tourists more time getting to that parking
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area
than going from the
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sunset
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viewing
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area
. In the south, there is a cultural center that provides the shortest access to
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Mount
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Eron
for
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travellers
.

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visitors
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have to
pass the walking
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track
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before
reaching the climbing
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track
and climb to the top of the mountain.
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that, there is another direction for those who do not want to climb at the second parking lot from the
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sunset
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viewing
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area
. It has a walking path that goes
directly
to the top of
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Mount
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Eron
.
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IELTS academic The map below shows tourists a number of different ways to visit Mount Eron in a na9onal park. Summarise the informa9on by selec9ng and repor9ng the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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