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The digram shoows the process of maufacturing orange juicie.

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing orange juice. Overall, there are various steps in marking orange juice, beginning with the collection of fresh oranges and ending with the distribution of packaged juice to shops. Firstly, oranges are picked, loaded onto trucks, and delivered to a processing plant where they are thoroughly washed by a machine. Following this, the juice is extracted from the oranges by a squeezing machine, and the solid waste, including orange peels and seeds, is collected and used to feed animals. Next, the squeezed juice can either be packaged and spent at the supermarket or transported to another factory to undergo an evaporation process. During the evaporation process, the fresh orange juice is processed by an evaporation machine where concentrate juice is then canned and transported to a warehouse. Before being combined with water again. After that, it is packaged and distributed to supermarkets ready to purchased.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing orange juice.

Overall
, there are various steps in marking orange
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juice
, beginning with the collection of fresh oranges and ending with the distribution of packaged
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
to shops.

Firstly
, oranges
are picked
, loaded onto trucks, and delivered to a processing plant where they are
thoroughly
washed by a machine.

Following this, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
is extracted
from the oranges by a squeezing machine, and the solid waste, including orange peels and seeds,
is collected
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to feed animals.
Next
, the squeezed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
can either
be packaged
and spent at the supermarket or transported to another factory to undergo an evaporation process.

During the evaporation process, the fresh orange
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
is processed
by an evaporation machine where concentrate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
juice
is then canned and transported to a warehouse.
“Before” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Before
being combined
with water again. After that, it
is packaged
and distributed to supermarkets ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
.
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IELTS academic The digram shoows the process of maufacturing orange juicie.

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5 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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