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Table compairs the amounts of five kinds of vehicles that were produced over 4 years from 2010 to 2014

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Table compairs the amounts of five kinds of vehicles that were produced over 4 years from 2010 to 2014. Overall, looking at the table, all of vehicles showed an upward trend. It is also noticeable that passenger vehicles had by far the highest number of produces, modifiable proportion of motorcycles was higher than others. Between 2010 and 2014, passenger vehicles were used as the most common vehicle so the number of passenger vehicles grown noticeably, from 11800000 to 13000000 products, an increase of 10, 2%, while commercial vehicles which take second place about quantity, increased steadily with percentage of change that standed at 17, 4%, was higher than passenger vehicle's one. Throughout the period shown, the same pattern can be seen motorcycles boosted sharply, from 540000 to 709000, an increase of 30, 8%. Beside that, light trucks had had slightly lower figures for these percentage which standed at second place, accounted for 23, 5%. However, over 4 years, the amounts of heavy truck just growed slightly so they had the lowest proportion, at 8, 3%.
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compairs
the amounts of five kinds of
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vehicles
that
were produced
over 4 years from 2010 to 2014.
Overall
, looking at the table, all of
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vehicles
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showed
an upward trend. It is
also
noticeable that
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passenger
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vehicles
had by far the highest number of produces, modifiable proportion of motorcycles was higher than others.

Between 2010 and 2014,
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passenger
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vehicles
were
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used
as the most common
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vehicle
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so
the number of
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passenger
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vehicles
grown
noticeably
, from 11800000 to 13000000 products, an increase of 10, 2%, while commercial
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vehicles
which take second place about quantity, increased
steadily
with percentage of
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change
that
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standed
at 17, 4%, was higher than
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passenger
vehicle's one.

Throughout the period shown, the same pattern can be
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seen
motorcycles boosted
sharply
, from 540000 to 709000, an increase of 30, 8%. Beside that, light trucks had had
slightly
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lower
figures for
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these percentage
which
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standed
at second place, accounted for 23, 5%.
However
, over 4 years, the amounts of heavy truck
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just
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growed
slightly
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so
they had the lowest proportion, at 8, 3%.
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IELTS academic Table compairs the amounts of five kinds of vehicles that were produced over 4 years from 2010 to 2014

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