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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. lOGo
The map shows three different places to create a leisure centre in them. It clear from the map that each location has it own features. According to what is shown, the location A, it seems to near to a necular station, beside the road and the river. And it is nice green land. But I think to put a leisure place right of nuclear station is not a good idea at all even if we have it near the road and river. So that make going to it is really easy by the road or the river. But I, personally, do not like this idea. Then, we have location B that hear of some buildings. And it also beside the road, but the river seems to be a little bit farther. Also, there no threats near to it and you can easily going to just by road. While, location C is different somehow, it is really far away from any river or road and that is make it hard to manage to go to it. And beside this place we have a forest and it is usually has animals and other stuff. So, I do not like this location. To sum up, we could say that the location B is best one of them and if we create it there. It would be more safer and easy to go to it.
The map
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shows
three
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different
places to create a leisure
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centre
in them. It
Did you mean "clears"?
clear
from the map that each
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location
has it
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own
features.

According to what
is shown
, the
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location
A, it seems to near to a
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necular
station, beside the
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road
and the
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river
. And it is nice green land.
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But
I
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think
to put a leisure place right of nuclear station is not a
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good
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idea
at all even if we have it near the
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road
and
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river
.
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So
that
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make
going to it is
really
easy by the
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road
or the
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river
.
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But
I,
personally
, do not like this
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idea
. Then, we have
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location
B that hear of
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some
buildings. And
It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.
it
also
beside the
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road
,
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but
the
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river
seems to be a
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
farther.
Also
, there no threats near to it and you can
easily
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
going
to
It seems that a verb is missing in front of the adjective "just".
just
by road.

While,
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location
C is
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different
somehow, it is
really
far away from any
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river
or
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road
and
that is
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make
it
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hard
to manage to go to it. And beside this place we have a forest and it is
usually
has animals and other stuff.
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So
, I do not like this location.

To sum up, we could say that the
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location
B
A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".
is best
one of them and if we create it there. It would be
Use only "safer" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more safer
and easy to go to it.
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IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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