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The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. wkWq

The given line graph illustrates the number of four species of fish, namely Atlantic Cod, Haddock, Yellow fin Tuna and Swordfosh from 1982 to 2007. From the overall analysis, Yellow fin Tuna and Swordfish remained stable in number, in contrast, Atlantic Cod and Haddock showed the oppose trend over the given time period. Getting into details, with regard to the number of Atlantic Cod fish stood at approximately 2, 30, 000 in the initial year, after which was dramatically decreas with 1, 50, 000 over a decade, then it fluctuated at nearly 1, 30, 000 by the end of 2007. In contrast, Haddock species were 1, 50, 000 in 1982, then it reached at 2, 60, 000 in the next ten years, the numbers were significantly fall by 1, 00, 000 in the final year. Moving further, the number of other two species were remain leveling off, but merely difference in their number. However, Yellow fin Tuna had approximately 1, 00, 000 number and Swordfish had around 30, 000 all over the period.

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