Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. rPe6
The table gives information about the number of companies and staff members (male, female) in England and wales from different years 1851 to 1901. Data is calibrated in numbers. Overall, The highest male employees from England in the year 1851 with 287, 100 people and female also from same year with 190, 00 but factories are less with 225. The extreme number of factories are in 1881 with 721 compare to all years. In the year, 1851 the total employees with 477, 100 in that 287, 100 are male and 190, 00 are female and factories are less with 225. Likewise, In 1861, total 227 factories the total staff is 291, 780 with 131, 780 men and 160, 000 women. The years 1871, 1881 and 1881 having similar number of employees with slight difference therefore, male members with 80, 123; 76, 132; 65, 000 with female members are 60, 000; 50, 000 and 40, 000 and factories are 622 in 1871, 721 in 1881 and 625 in 1891. Finally, the employees in the years 1901 with 600 factories and 61, 000 total staff with 31, 000 men and 30, 000 respectively.
The table gives information about the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
and staff members (male,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
female)
in England and wales from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
years 1851 to 1901. Data
is calibrated
in numbers.

Overall
, The highest male
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
from England in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
1851 with 287, 100
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
female
also
from same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
with 190, 00
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factories
are less with 225. The extreme number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factories
are in 1881 with 721
Possible agreement error. The noun 'compare' seems to be countable, so consider using: "compares".
compare
to all years.

In the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
, 1851 the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
with 477, 100 in that 287, 100 are male and 190, 00 are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
female
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factories
are less with 225.
Likewise
, In 1861,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
227
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factories
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
staff is 291, 780 with 131, 780
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
and 160, 000 women.

The years 1871, 1881 and 1881 having similar number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
with slight difference
therefore
, male members with 80, 123; 76, 132; 65, 000 with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
female
members are 60, 000; 50, 000 and 40, 000 and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factories
are 622 in 1871, 721 in 1881 and 625 in 1891.
Finally
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
in the years 1901 with 600
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
factories
and 61, 000
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
total
staff with 31, 000
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
and 30, 000
respectively
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
191 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    Contribution of sectors to the economy in the UK
    The bar graph provides information on the proportion of contribution of the different sectors such as agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services to the economy of UK from 1900-2000. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the data that the trend of agriculture and manufacturing wer...
  • 6band
    Changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology
    The data is in the form of a line graph, which provides information on the proportion of changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology (home computer, CD player mobile phone and internet access) between 1996/97 to 2002/03 in the UK households. Overall, the percentage change for all tech...
  • 6band
    Process of producing potable water
    The diagram illustrates the process of removing salt from the seawater to produce potable water. First, the salt water is piped down the sea. Next, it is placed to a Pre-treatment filter, filter backwash will then be returned to the sea. After filtering, the water is forced through a membrane at hi...
  • 6band
    Average number of hours worked per week
    Two graphs give different information related to eight professional groups. The bar chart indicates the number of weekly work hours done by the groups. Simultaneously, the pie graph illustrates the percentages of people suffering from stress-related illness in the different professions given. Busin...
  • 6band
    The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists In work after five years.
    The graph anf the table below reveal some interesting data concerning the typology of employement and the salary earned by Antrhopology graduates after 5 years of job. The most significant fact are that the majority of them was employed in a full-time job and the highest amount of those whom were wo...
  • 5.5band
    Pie chart different device to watch television in Canada
    The pie charts bellow show that how people use different device to watch television in Canada in a decade, from 2009 to 2019. From those pie charts, we could find some changes over decade. How most of the people to watch television has changed from conventional TV to flat-screen TV. And the increase...