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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. g23a
The given map illustrates the information about three possible locations for a leisure center. Overall, there are three places labeled as A, B, and C. Also, all of them located in rural areas. The first possible place for the future recreational area is A that is located in the east. Moreover, it is located nearby the manufacturing place, whereas C is set nearby the forest. Therefore, a lot of trees can be seen in the third area. However, the river is located far from location C, while the A and B areas are almost surrounded by the river. The B is located at the center. In addition, there are three high-rise buildings nearby it. Also, all three potential locations are in the rural area and there is a river which can be seen in the central part of the place. Location A is situated on the right side of the river, whereas the other two locations situated on the left side.
The
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given
map illustrates the information about three possible
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locations
for a leisure center.

Overall
, there are three
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places
labeled as A, B, and C.
Also
, all of them
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located
in rural areas.

The
first
possible
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place
for the future recreational
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area
is A
that is
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located
in the east.
Moreover
, it is
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located
nearby the manufacturing
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place
, whereas C
is set
nearby the forest.
Therefore
,
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a lot of
trees can be
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seen
in the third
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area
.
However
, the
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river
is
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located
far from
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location
C, while the A and B
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areas
are almost surrounded by the
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river
. The B is
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located
at the center.
In addition
, there are three high-rise buildings nearby it.

Also
, all three potential
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locations
are in the rural
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area
and there is a
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river
which can be
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seen
in the central part of the
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place
.
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Location
A
is situated
on the right side of the
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river
, whereas the other two
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locations
situated on the
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left
side.
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IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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