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The graph below shows the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter olympics.

The graph below shows the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter olympics. 0Jdn
The number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter olympics are sketch in the given graph. Overall, Graphs represents the highest ranking of gold, sliver and bronze medal in winter and summer olympics with measures of top five countries like norway, us, germany, russia and canada respectively. In winter olympics games, the highest ranking of gold medal is won by norway is about 105 respectively. whereas 250 sliver and 360 of bronze medal is consumed by norway. Meanwhile, us score 80 gold, 230 sliver and 310 of bronze medal winner in all time of winter seasons. However, Germany, russia and canada has ranked 90, 80 and 60 gold, 170, 140 and 150 of sliver and 230, 170 and 200 of bronze medals are won in winter sports. In summer sports events, The us ranked highest medal winner for all time which is about 2500 respectively. Than after russia ahead with total 17000 of medal in summer games. Moreover, germany has 16000 of medals which is won in summer olympics. And at last great britain and france has earn small number of medals winner in summer games is about 700 and 600 respectively.
The number of
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medals
won by the top five countries in the
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summer
and
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winter
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olympics
are sketch in the
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graph.

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sliver
and bronze
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medal
in
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winter
and
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summer
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olympics
with measures of top five countries like
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norway
, us,
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germany
,
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russia
and
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canada
respectively
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In
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winter
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olympics
games, the highest ranking of gold
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medal
is won
by
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norway
is about 105
respectively
.
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whereas
250
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sliver
and 360 of bronze
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medal
is consumed
by
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norway
. Meanwhile, us score 80 gold, 230
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sliver
and 310 of bronze
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medal
winner in all time of
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winter
seasons.
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, Germany,
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russia
and
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canada
has ranked 90, 80 and 60 gold, 170, 140 and 150 of
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and 230, 170 and 200 of bronze
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are won
in
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sports.

In
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sports
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,
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ranked highest
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winner for all time which is about 2500
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after
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ahead with total 17000 of
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in
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games.
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,
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germany
has 16000 of
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which
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olympics
. And at last
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number of
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medals
winner in
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games is about 700 and 600
respectively
.
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