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The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. PqPE
The pie chart illustrated; In Brighton University a group of students had graduated and then worked in various field in 2019. Let's discuss the percentages of employees in the eight sectors. Overall, after graduation, 75% of students had selected among industry, education, and government sectors as their workplace, while considering the remaining 25% of students, individually selected other sectors: transportations and warehousings, civil services, sports, science and technologies, charities, and others. In 2019, 33% and 16. 3% of employees in service and manufacture industries respectively. Comparatively 26. 8% of workers in the education and political field and merely 7% of staffs in science and transportation and also, 5. 6% and 2. 8% of graduates had selected civil and other sectors simultaneously. finally, less than 1% of scholars had interested in charity and sports. In conclusion, most of the graduates had worked in industries and a few employees had chosen the sports field.
The pie chart illustrated; In Brighton University a group of students had graduated and then worked in various field in 2019.
Let
's discuss the percentages of employees in the eight sectors.

Overall
, after graduation, 75% of students had selected among industry, education, and
government
sectors as their workplace, while considering the remaining 25% of students,
individually
selected other sectors: transportations and
warehousings
, civil services, sports, science and technologies, charities,
and others
.

In 2019, 33% and 16. 3% of employees in service and manufacture industries
respectively
.
Comparatively
26. 8% of workers in the education and political field and
merely
7% of staffs in science and transportation and
also
, 5. 6% and 2. 8% of graduates had selected civil and other sectors
simultaneously
.
finally
, less than 1% of scholars had interested in charity and sports.

In conclusion
, most of the graduates had worked in industries and a few employees had chosen the sports field.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

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