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the graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005

the graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005 n3J7
the given line chart illustrates information on the overall figures of the polluted emission released into the air in UK during the period 1990 to 2005. in the general, it is clear that the amount of air pollutants in the air decrease and the household contributed the least level of pollution in this period. To begin, in 1990 the total number of polluted air produced was 7 milion tonnes. After 9 years there was a significant decrease in the overall figures of air pollutants to number for approximately 4 million tonnes and continued to fall to about 5 million in 2005. In contrast, the amount of air pollutants was much lower from transport and household sources. Air pollution from transport remained relatively constant at about 1 million tonnes from 1990 to 2005, whereas air pollutants from households saw a decrease from almost 1 million tonnes in 1990 to approximately 0. 1 million tonnes by 2005. See also:
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line chart illustrates information on the
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figures of the polluted emission released into the
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air
in UK during the period 1990 to 2005.

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that the amount of
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air
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pollutants
in the
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decrease and the household contributed the least level of pollution in this period.

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begin
, in 1990 the total number of polluted
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produced was 7
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milion
tonnes. After 9 years there was a significant decrease in the
overall
figures of
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air
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pollutants
to number for approximately 4
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million
tonnes and continued to fall to about 5
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million
in 2005.
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, the amount of
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air
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pollutants
was much lower from transport and household sources.
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pollution from transport remained
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constant at about 1
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million
tonnes from 1990 to 2005, whereas
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air
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pollutants
from households
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a decrease from almost 1
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million
tonnes in 1990 to approximately 0. 1
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tonnes by 2005.

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IELTS academic the graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005

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