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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The three locations for a leisure center shown on the map are named A, B, and C. A could be a plantation of oil and gas situated near B wherein it looks like a residential building or a hotel. In terms of transportation, since A and B are on the same side it will be easy for both areas as it can be reached by car only. On the other hand, the greenery C is a bit far from A and B. C is separated by water, although it can be reached by car because it is also connected by a road, maybe it will be easy to go by the water. C looks to be a forest where any tourist or locals living in Location B probably go for leisure. Based on the map the Location A might not be ideal to built there as it looks extremely close to Location B, wherein it brings hazard to the people residing on the buildings or nearby location B. It could be ideal if it situated on Location C as it is an isolated area and far from any risk to the people around the center.
The three
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locations
for a leisure center shown on the map
are named
A, B, and C. A could be a plantation of oil and gas situated near B wherein it looks like a residential building or a hotel. In terms of transportation, since A and B are on the same side it will be easy for both areas as it can
be reached
by car
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On the other hand
, the greenery C is a bit far from A and B. C
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by car
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also
connected by a road, maybe it will be easy to go by the water. C looks to be a forest where any tourist or locals living in
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Location
B
probably
go for leisure. Based on the map the
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Location
A might not be ideal to built there as it looks
extremely
close to
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Location
B, wherein it brings hazard to the
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people
residing on the buildings or nearby
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location
B. It could be ideal if it situated on
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Location
C as it is an isolated area and far from any
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risk
to the
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around the center.

IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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