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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. PPBd
The map in the up indicates the differentiates in 1995 and present. Overall, when we take a look, we can see several things have changed. The differences are in South East and North. İn 1995, there was farmland in the North-East of the village. Just back at that, there was a forest park. There was housing as well. in the West. There was a shop and hotels just parallel each other. Well, there was a fish market underneath the shop and a cafe bottom of the hotel. In the easiest part of the village, there was a sea and a fishing port into it. When it comes to the present, we see farmland has altered to golf and tennis area. Housing has not differed and restaurant has built instead of the shop. But the hotel is still there. İt seems there is a new place which is a car park. The fish market has also been changed to apartments but the cafe has not differed. Finally, the sea is there but it illustrates fishing port has been absent from there.
The map in the up indicates the differentiates in 1995 and present.

Overall
, when we take a look, we can
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. The differences are in South East and North.

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1995, there was farmland in the North-East of the village. J
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back at that, there was a forest park. There was housing a
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the West. There was a shop and hotels j
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parallel each other. Well, there was a fish market underneath the shop and a
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bottom of the hotel. In the easiest part of the village, there was a sea and a fishing port into it.

When it c
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to the present, we s
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farmland has altered to golf and tennis area. Housing has not differed and restaurant has built i
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of the shop. B
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the hotel is s
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there.
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seems there is a new place which is a car park. The fish market has al
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has not differed. Fi
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t illustrates fishing port has been absent from there.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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4 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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