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The given pie charts illustrate the information about the energy consumption and the emissions of greenhouse gas due to it in six various household equipment in Australia.

The given pie charts illustrate the information about the energy consumption and the emissions of greenhouse gas due to it in six various household equipment in Australia. BjKw
The given pie charts illustrate the information about the energy consumption and the emissions of greenhouse gas due to it in six various household equipment in Australia. The six household equipment are heating, water heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting, and other appliances. Overall, heating utilizes the most amount of energy whereas water heating emits the highest amount of Carbon Dioxide in Australian houses. The most amount of energy is used to get heating (42%), followed by water heating which is 30% and other appliances used 15% energy on an average household. Less than 15% of energy is used for refrigeration, lighting, and cooling. In contrast, the most CO2 was generated by water heating which is 32%. The second most reaching for CO2 emission from Australian household is from other appliances (28%). The heating and refrigeration emitted a similar amount of green house almost 15% and around 10% emitted by cooling and lighting.
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consumption and the emissions of greenhouse gas due to it in six various
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equipment in Australia. The six
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equipment are
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,
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, refrigeration, cooling, lighting, and other appliances.

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utilizes the most
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emits the highest
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amount
of Carbon Dioxide in Australian
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which is 30% and other appliances
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15%
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which is 32%. The second most reaching for CO2 emission from Australian
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is from other appliances (28%). The
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and refrigeration emitted a similar
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almost 15% and around 10% emitted by cooling and lighting.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts illustrate the information about the energy consumption and the emissions of greenhouse gas due to it in six various household equipment in Australia.

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