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The map below shows difference between 1995 and at present.

The map below shows difference between 1995 and at present. G9Wnm
The diagrams illustrate changesin two periods in 1995 and at present Overall, farmland and forest park converted into a golf court and tennis centre. The only places are not change its position, for example, hotel and cafe housing is expand. So the shop is convert into the restaurant. So sea located in the south of the town and in the sea constructed fishing port. Fish market convert into apartments. Near the hotel in the north east of the town built car park.
The diagrams illustrate
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changesin
two periods in 1995 and at present
Overall
, farmland and forest park converted into a golf court and tennis
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
places are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
its position,
for example
, hotel and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
housing is
Consider using a past participle here: "expanded".
expand
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
the shop is convert into the restaurant.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
sea located in the south of the town and in the sea constructed fishing port. Fish market convert into apartments. Near the hotel in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
north east
of the town built car park.
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