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I have always been a massive fan of music

I have always been a massive fan of music NlWYd

I have always been a massive fan of music. I love listening to music because good music helps me recharge my battery as well as uplift my spirit after a long day overloaded with work and study. I listen to many different kinds of music, from Rock to Jazz, depending on where I am, who I’m with, and how I feel at the time. Today I’m going to tell you about one of my favourite songs, titled ‘Hello’. The genre is pop, as characterized by its upbeat music and simple, down-to-earth lyrics. It’s actually a single that just went platinum this week. The song is viral at the moment, I mean, it’s the talk of the town. It’s been topping the charts for weeks and has got millions of streams on music sites. The person who performs the song is Adele, an internationally acclaimed artist, hailing from the UK. She’s made a killing with her albums, but she’s maintained a somewhat low-profile lifestyle. I am a huge fan of her. I have an impressive collection of her records that I really treasure. Maybe I would have the fortune to attend one of her concerts

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