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the graph below shows the consumption of fast foods(grams) in Spain from 1970 to 1990

the graph below shows the consumption of fast foods(grams) in Spain from 1970 to 1990 Ew9xb
Illustrated in the line graph is the consumption of fast foods in Spain from 1970 to 1990, based on grams. To put it in a nutshell, the amount of Hamburger consumption and Fish & Chips consumption followed an upward tendency; meanwhile, there was a downward tendency in the remaining figure during the timescale under investigation. As can be seen from the chart, regarding the consumption of Hamburger, it is obvious that this number increased dramatically by approaching 60 to around 150 from 90 from 1970 to 1980 before there was a swift escalation of nearly 150 to exactly 300 in 1985. Afterwards, the last spell witnessed a drastic expansion of 200 to exactly 500 from 300 in the amount Hamburger consumption. Moving onto the profile of the level of Fish & Chips consumption, it is clear that this ratio went up moderately by 80 to nearly 90 from 10 between 1970 and 1980, and this was followed by a slight increment of 20 to roughly 110. Subsequently, Spain went through an enormous rise of 180 from roughly 110 to well under 290 in Fish & Chips consumption Taking the pizza consumption into consideration, what is worth mentioning is that there was a considerable tumble of 90 to well under 210 from just over 300, with Spain undergoing a gentle fall of 10 to a bottom of 200. Thereaafter, this rate rose slightly by 5 to approaching 205 from 200.
Illustrated in the line graph is the
consumption
of
fast
foods in Spain from 1970 to 1990, based on grams.

To put it in a nutshell, the amount of Hamburger
consumption
and Fish & Chips
consumption
followed an upward tendency; meanwhile, there was a downward tendency in the remaining figure during the timescale under investigation.

As can be
seen
from the chart, regarding the
consumption
of Hamburger, it is obvious that this number increased
dramatically
by approaching 60 to around 150
from 90 from 1970
to 1980
before
there was a swift escalation of
nearly
150 to exactly 300 in 1985. Afterwards, the last spell witnessed a drastic expansion of 200 to exactly 500 from 300 in the amount Hamburger consumption.

Moving onto the profile of the level of Fish & Chips
consumption
, it is
clear
that this ratio went up
moderately
by 80 to
nearly
90
from 10 between 1970
and 1980, and this
was followed
by a slight increment of 20 to roughly 110.
Subsequently
, Spain went through an enormous rise of 180 from roughly 110 to well under 290 in Fish & Chips consumption

Taking the pizza
consumption
into consideration, what is worth mentioning is that there was a considerable tumble of 90 to well under 210 from
just
over 300, with Spain undergoing a gentle fall of 10 to a bottom of 200.
Thereaafter
, this rate rose
slightly
by 5 to approaching 205 from 200.
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