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The below chart represent information about the popularity of 5 famous Instagram accounts in 2008 and 2021. Looking from our world scenario all famous people to get rows in 2021 with Cristiano Ronaldo stand at top in 2021 by having more follower. we look at the figure of 2008. 21 and Selena Gomez km was the having highest follower and followed by Ariana Grande and Cristiano Ronaldo whatever the clock and religion influence the solutions are inverse 1 million. In 2021 Selena Gomez was not too much popular it was 2019 but the figure was around 250 million followers but the more the Rope figure seems to be above 20 to 50 million followers followed by Ariana Grande and Jennifer by holding 250 millions follower. in conclusion Cristiano Ronaldo has kept on their families of 60 million follower and send it to all the remaining celebrities are also quite promising to 2021

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 and followed by Ariana Grande and Cristiano Ronaldo whatever the clock and religion influence the solutions are inverse 1 million.

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followers
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