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the map below shows a beachfront in Australia in 19650 and now

the map below shows a beachfront in Australia in 19650 and now N8bNy

The picture illustrates how a beachfront area in Australia changes between 1950 and today. Looking from an overall perspective, in currently, many amenities are upgraded and built by the sea such as surf clubs, pools, a restaurant, and a lighthouse. In 1950, there was only a car park which is located at the end of the road but now this car park has become bigger, and the road is expanded lasting to the beach. Furthermore, a playground to the northwest is demolished to make room for a new small car park. To the coastal area, while the east pool is still unchanged, the west pool is upgraded from 25m to 50m. Especially, there are two surf clubs which are constructed next to each pool. Behind the west surf club, it is a restaurant which is twice as big as 50 m pool. Additionally, the lighthouse is innovated to be bigger.

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changes
 between 1950 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Looking from an overall
 perspective, in currently
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 amenities are upgraded
 and built by the sea such as surf clubs, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pools
, a restaurant, and a lighthouse.

In 1950, there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a car park which is located
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the road This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 this car park has become bigger, and the road is expanded
 lasting to the beach. Furthermore
, a playground to the northwest is demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 room for a new This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 car park.

To the coastal area, while the east You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
 is still
 unchanged, the west You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
is upgraded
 from Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"25 m
25m
 to Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "50 m"50 m
50m
. Especially
, there are two surf clubs which are constructed
next
 to each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
. Behind the west surf club, it is a restaurant which is twice as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 as 50 m You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtankswimming poollakebathlagoonpond
pool
. Additionally
, the lighthouse is innovated
 to be bigger. 