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The picture illustrates how a beachfront area in Australia changes between 1950 and the present. Looking from an overall perspective, currently, there are extensive developments in regard to the construction and innovation of amenities, car parks, and a road. In 1950, there was only one car park to the east side which is located at the end of the road, but now this car park has enlarged double, and the road is expanded lasting from the city to the beach and leading to the lighthouse. Furthermore, a playground to the northwest is demolished to make room for a new small car park. To the coastal area, while the east pool is still remained unchanged, the west one is upgraded from 25 meters to 50 meters. Especially, there are two surf clubs which are constructed next to each pool. Behind the west surf club, it is an additional restaurant which is twice as big as 50 meters pool. Additionally, the lighthouse is also innovated to be bigger.

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changes
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car
 parks, and a road.

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To the coastal area, while the east pool is still
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, there are two surf clubs which are constructed
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big
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