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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Explain the line graph in 150 words

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Explain the line graph in 150 words ElMDL
The The composite line graphs taken from the U. S. Bureau of labour statistics depicts how the mean yearly expenses of U. S. consumers on cell phones and residential phone services have changed from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the usage of cell phone services has shown a staggering increase over 10 years, with a proportionate decline in money spent on residential phone services. At the beginning of the 21st century, the expenditure on cell phones was just over 200$, the least amount spent in the decade. On the contrary, the wages used for residential phone services was maximum and stood at around 700$ per year. As the years passed on, the expenditure on residential phone services had shown a remarkable decline with an equal increase observed in the expenses on cell phones and became equal in 2006, with appropriately 550$ spent on both the services. Finally, in the year 2010, the expenses on residential phone services reached a trough with 400$ spent on the same, in contrast to cell phone services on which the largest sum of money was spent and was just over 700$.
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The The
composite line graphs taken from the U. S. Bureau of
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labour
statistics depicts how the mean yearly expenses of U. S. consumers on
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cell
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phones
and
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residential
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phone
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services
have
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changed
from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, the usage of
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cell
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phone
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services
has shown a staggering increase over 10 years, with a proportionate decline in money
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spent
on
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residential
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phone
services.

At the beginning of the 21st century, the expenditure on
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cell
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phones
was
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just
over
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$200".
200$
, the least amount
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spent
in the decade.
On the contrary
, the wages
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used
for
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residential
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phone
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services
was maximum and stood at around
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$700".
700$
per
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year
. As the years passed on, the expenditure on
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residential
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phone
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services
had shown a remarkable decline with an equal increase observed in the expenses on
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cell
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phones
and became equal in 2006, with
appropriately
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$550".
550$
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spent
on both the services.

Finally
, in the
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year
2010, the expenses on
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residential
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phone
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services
reached a trough with
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$400".
400$
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spent
on the same,
in contrast
to
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cell
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phone
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services
on which the largest sum of money was
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spent
and was
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just
over
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$700".
700$
.
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IELTS academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Explain the line graph in 150 words

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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