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the diagram below shows the process of plastic bottle production.

the diagram below shows the process of plastic bottle production. e3We7
The diagram mentioned highlights main stages involved in the process of plastic bottle production. Overall, a preform of bottle, extruder machine, a needle and a mould are the essential equipment and ingredient. There are 6 stages in this process, starting with melting the preform, then filling the air and ending with a finished bottle. The process commences when a plastic preform is melted in a extruder machine with high heat. After that, it is moved out of the machine and placed in a closed mould, which has the shape of bottle. Following that, the preform is injected with pressurized air through a needle put at its mouth, and this preform keeps extending following the mould’s shape. When filling air phase finishes, the mould is removed and then final product is a completed plastic bottle.
The diagram mentioned highlights main stages involved in the process of plastic bottle production.

Overall
, a
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preform
of bottle, extruder machine, a needle and a
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mould
are the essential equipment and ingredient. There are 6 stages in this process, starting with melting the
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preform
, then filling the air and ending with a finished bottle.

The process commences when a plastic
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preform
is melted
in
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a
extruder machine with high heat. After that, it is
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moved
out of the machine and placed in a closed
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mould
, which has the shape of bottle.

Following that, the
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preform
is injected
with pressurized air through a needle put at its mouth, and this
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preform
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keeps
extending following the
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mould
’s shape. When filling air phase finishes, the
Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.
mould
is removed
and then final product is a completed plastic bottle.
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IELTS academic the diagram below shows the process of plastic bottle production.

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