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The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. OXkN
The given map shows the two possible locations for the construction of the new supermarket in the town of Garlsdon, which has a population of 65 thousand people Overall, the first site lies in the suburban area of the town, while the second one locates in the town centre. Both positions are located near the railway that crosses through the town and are also closed to the housing region To begin with, the first suggestion is to place the supermarket on the northwest of the countryside that surrounds the centre of the town. This site lies between a railway and a main road which goes out of the central area and heads to Hindon town, which is located 12 km away Meanwhile, the second possible site is right in the middle of the town centre, surrounded by the residential region. To the north and south of this housing area, there are two industrial regions, which makes it easier for the residence to access. Also, there are two roads that connect the town center with two other residential areas of Bransdon and Cransdon, which is beneficial for transportation.
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the two possible locations for the construction of the new supermarket in the
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town
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Garlsdon
, which has a population of 65 thousand
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people


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, the
first
site lies in the suburban
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area
of the
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town
, while the second one locates in the
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town
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centre
. Both positions
are located
near the railway that crosses through the
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town
and are
also
closed to the housing
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region


To
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begin
with, the
first
suggestion is to place the supermarket on the northwest of the countryside that surrounds the
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centre
of the
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town
. This site lies between a railway and a main road which goes out of the central
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area
and heads to
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Hindon
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town
, which
is located
12 km
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away


Meanwhile, the second possible site is right in the middle of the
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town
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centre
, surrounded by the residential region. To the north and south of this housing
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area
, there are two industrial regions, which
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makes
it easier for the residence to access.
Also
, there are two roads that connect the
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town
center with two other residential
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areas
of
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Bransdon
and
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Cransdon
, which is beneficial for transportation.
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IELTS academic The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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