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The two maps show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relavant.

The two maps show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities. Yl0Q
The maps illustrate how an island is planned to be developed. Overall, there will be extensive developments, a variety of new objects will be constructed, while the location of the trees and of the beach will be experienced no changes. Looking into details, on the south side of the island the pier will be put up and on the north corner, the restaurant will be erected. Between the restaurant and pier the reception will be located, surrounded by a numerous of accommodation houses to the east and west side. The location of the residential houses will resemble a circle. The road between reception, restaurant and pier will run by vehicle track, while the road between residential houses will be connected by footpath. To the north-west side there will be a beach suitable for swimming. Approximately a one-third of the area will be not altered and the location of the trees in this area will be almost the same.
The maps illustrate how an island
is planned
to
be developed
.
Overall
, there will be extensive developments, a variety of new objects will
be constructed
, while the location of the trees and of the beach will
be experienced
no
changes
.

Looking into
details
, on the south side of the island the pier will
be put
up and on the north corner, the restaurant will
be erected
. Between the restaurant and pier the reception will
be located
, surrounded by
a numerous of
accommodation
houses
to the east and west side. The location of the residential
houses
will resemble a circle. The road between reception, restaurant and pier will run by vehicle
track
, while the road between residential
houses
will
be connected
by footpath. To the north-west side there will be a beach suitable for swimming. Approximately a one-third of the area will be not altered and the location of the trees in this area will be almost the same.
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IELTS academic The two maps show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
158 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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