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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated by using hot water from underground. Summarize the information in the diagram to explain how the system works.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated by using hot water from underground. PDoE
The diagram displays the process of electricity power generation. Overall, electricity power is produced using geothermal energy through a relatively sophisticated procedure which comprises 5 different stages. Looking into details, the process begins with the pumping of the hot water from underground to heat exchanger, where the heat is extracted to run the power station. Simultaneously, the cold water after this process pumped back down to the underground. Afterwards, by means of obtained heat from the heat exchanger the power station generates electricity. Finally, the last stage is when the process ends with delivering the obtained through the cables to the consumers. The process is reversible and continues and represents an endless number of described cycles, using natural sources. (I don’t know what else to write, the diagram is too small, I have already described everything, but didn’t reach the required minimal quantity)
The diagram displays the
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of electricity
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power
generation.
Overall
, electricity
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power
is produced
using geothermal energy through a
relatively
sophisticated procedure which comprises 5
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different
stages.

Looking into
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details
, the
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process
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begins
with the pumping of the hot water from underground to
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heat
exchanger, where the
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heat
is extracted
to run the
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power
station.
Simultaneously
, the
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cold
water after this
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process
pumped back down to the underground. Afterwards, by means of obtained
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heat
from the
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heat
exchanger the
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power
station generates electricity.
Finally
, the last stage is when the
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process
ends with delivering the obtained through the cables to the consumers. The
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process
is reversible and continues and represents an endless number of
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described
cycles, using natural sources. (I don’t know what else to write, the diagram is too
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small
, I have already
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described
everything,
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but
didn’t reach the required minimal quantity)
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated by using hot water from underground.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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