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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. GDjw
The diagram compares the trees occupied area in different continents of the world in the years 1990, 2000 and 2005. Dimensions are measured in hectares. Overall, Europe has the highest forest land with 1001 millions of hectares in the period of 2005. Whereas, Oceania has least occupies plantation with 197 millions hectares in the same year. Europe has increasing trend in forest area from 1990 to 2005. Firstly, Africa shows downward trend in forest land from the period 1990(749) to 2005(691). Secondly, Asia's occupies plantation area was 576 in 1990 and 570 in 2000. Furthermore, Europe has increase in forest land from 989 million hectares 1001 in a decade. In the time of 1990, 2000 and 2005 North America has no such major change in forest land. South America has downward trend in occupied forest area and it went down from 946 to 882. Lastly, Oceania has the least occupied area it was 199 in 1990 and 198 in 2000 and 197 in 2005.
The diagram compares the trees occupied
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different
continents of the world in the years 1990, 2000 and 2005. Dimensions
are measured
in hectares.

Overall
, Europe has the highest
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forest
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land
with
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1001 millions of
hectares in the period of 2005.
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, Oceania has least occupies plantation with 197 millions hectares in the same year. Europe has increasing trend in
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forest
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from 1990 to 2005.

Firstly
, Africa
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downward trend in
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forest
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land
from the period 1990(749) to 2005(691).
Secondly
, Asia's occupies plantation
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area
was 576 in 1990 and 570 in 2000.
Furthermore
, Europe has increase in
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forest
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land
from 989 million hectares 1001 in a decade.

In the time of 1990, 2000 and 2005 North America has no such major
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change
in
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forest
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land
. South America has downward
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trend
in occupied
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forest
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area
and it went down from 946 to 882.
Lastly
, Oceania has the least occupied
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area
it was 199 in 1990 and 198 in 2000 and 197 in 2005.
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IELTS academic The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

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6.0
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