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The main source of energy in 1980s and 1990s in America

The two pue charts and tables describe the major sources of energy in the year between 1980s to 1990s in America. Overall, the major sources of energy was highest in oil, where the least amount of energy was in nuclear power. Firstly, the main source of energy in USA was oil around 42% in 1980s and 33% in 1990s. Moreover the second largest source of energy was coal, around 22% in 1980s and in 1990s it slightly rose by 5% in America. In addition nuclear power source was third Highest energy in chart and it was about 5 % in 1980. And it doubled in 1990 about 10%. Finally is we talk about natural gas in the year 1980s the energy source was 26% but ten years later it provided one percentage less than the 80s. However there was no change in hydroelectric power, which remained at 5% in both decades.
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in the year between 1980s to 1990s in America.
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was highest in oil, where the least amount of
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was in nuclear power.
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in USA was oil around 42% in 1980s and 33% in 1990s.
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was coal, around 22% in 1980s and in 1990s it
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nuclear power
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was third Highest
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in chart and it was about 5 % in 1980. And it doubled in 1990 about 10%.
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is we talk about natural gas in the year 1980s the
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was 26%
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ten years later it provided one percentage less than the 80s.
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in hydroelectric power, which remained at 5% in both decades.

IELTS academic The main source of energy in 1980s and 1990s in America

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