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The charts below give information about the high- speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002.

the table chart and the bar chart show the high-speed uninterrupted internet connection of families in 5 nations between 2001 and 2002. Bạn đã gửi Hôm nay lúc 22: 53 generally speaking, usa and britain had the highest proportion change from 2001 to 2002. In the other hand, the connections for every 1000 citizens of South Korea and USA were more than the statistic for the other countries. Bạn đã gửi Hôm nay lúc 22: 57 Categorically speaking, the percentage change of Korea was 20% but the connections per 1000 people touched the highest point in 2001 and touched the second highest point in 2002. USA had a significant percentage change by 170%. Moreover, the connections per 1000 residents in 2002 was 251, 1, which was the highest. Bạn đã gửi Hôm nay lúc 23: 19 The diagrams reveal that the proportion transformation of Britain was 230% compared to 80% of Germany and 120% of Switzerland. In contrast, the connections per 1000 residents of Switzerland in 2001 was higher than the statisfic for Germany and Britain. It's interesting to note that the enormous change of Britain makes it became the countries having the bigger connections per 1000 people than Germany and Switzerland.
the table chart and the bar chart
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the high-speed uninterrupted internet
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connection
of families in 5 nations between 2001 and 2002.

Bạn đã gửi Hôm nay lúc 22: 53

generally
speaking, usa and britain had the highest proportion
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change
from 2001 to 2002. In the other hand, the
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connections
for every 1000 citizens of South Korea and USA were more than the statistic for the other countries.

Bạn đã gửi Hôm nay lúc 22: 57

Categorically
speaking, the percentage
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change
of Korea was 20%
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but
the
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connections
per 1000
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people
touched the highest point in 2001 and touched the second highest point in 2002. USA had a significant percentage
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change
by 170%.
Moreover
, the
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connections
per 1000 residents in 2002 was 251, 1, which was the highest.

Bạn đã gửi Hôm nay lúc 23: 19

The diagrams reveal that the proportion transformation of Britain was 230% compared to 80% of Germany and 120% of Switzerland.
In contrast
, the
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connections
per 1000 residents of Switzerland in 2001 was higher than the statisfic for Germany and Britain. It's interesting to note that the enormous
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change
of Britain
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makes
it became the countries having the bigger
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connections
per 1000
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people
than Germany and Switzerland.

IELTS academic The charts below give information about the high- speed continuous internet connection of households in five countries in 2001 and 2002.

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