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The line graphs, emphasis the information regarding five types of jam production from 2009-2014.

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The line graphs, emphasis the information regarding five types of jam production from 2009-2014. Overall, it is evident that the sales of all kinds of jam experience an upward trend, except for plum during the given years. In addition, strawberry marked its position as the highest and most popular product throughout, although Raspberry successfully reached its peak and become most sold in the year 2012. Initially, at 32 million units in 2009, the sales of strawberry increased massively to 7 million at the end of 2014. Similarity, the figures of Raspberry and grapes witnessed the same performance in which the sale of the product grew over the year 2014 and stood at 5. 5 million and 4. 5 million respectively. Further on, the sale of the cherry jam was varying every year, made the highest sale of 3. 2 million units, in the year 2012. Plum experienced and notices a dis satisfactory sale throughout this period. In 2009, it makes a mark of 2. 6 million and declined gradually to zero production by the time of 2014.

The line graphs, emphasis the information regarding five types of jam production from 2009-2014.

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