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plans for two possible sites for shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

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The map demonatrate plans for two possible sites for shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. The options are One in the North and the other is in the South-West. As we can see the S1 site is above the railway near the River and the Housing Estate. S2 site is near to the railway and the opposite to the Industrial Estate. The S1 site is a good place for another transportion except trains like boat in the river and car by road. Moreover, commonly people prefer comes to open and green areas and not to places like Industrial estate. In conclude. The potential and benefits of build the s1 site is singificantly and provide a financial source to other places around.
The map
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demonatrate
plans for two possible
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sites
for shopping mall in the city of
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Brandfield
.

The options are One in the North and the other is in the South-West.

As we can
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see
the S1
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site
is above the railway near the River and the Housing Estate. S2
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site
is near to the railway and the opposite to the Industrial Estate.

The S1
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site
is a
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good
place for another
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transportion
except trains like boat in the river and car by road.

Moreover
,
commonly
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people
prefer
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comes
to open and green areas and not to places like Industrial estate.

In conclude. The potential and benefits of build the s1
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site
is
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singificantly
and provide a financial source to other places around.
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IELTS academic plans for two possible sites for shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
122 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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